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WITH A SMILE MANGA
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by withasmilemanga » October 17th, 2011, 8:29 pm
new chapters.... scanning..... uploading
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by withasmilemanga » October 17th, 2011, 8:40 pm
working for another new pages
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by eishiya » October 17th, 2011, 10:13 pm
You are allowed to bump ONCE A MONTH. It's all in the rules, make sure you read them. They're right above this thread.
Busy, busy.
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by withasmilemanga » November 18th, 2011, 9:44 am
http://withasmilemanga.blogspot.com/ visit us... new updates and more info.... hope u like it >_<...
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by Nigz » November 18th, 2011, 11:58 am
So I read the first chapter and its not bad, the pacing could use a bit of work but the characters are a bit flat
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by withasmilemanga » November 19th, 2011, 11:25 am
thannks for reading my manga... byt the way... what do you mean flat???? well, i really want to know so i can improve it more... thank you again.. ehehhe... i 
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by Himawari93 » December 4th, 2011, 11:36 am
Somehow I like it, yet somehow I don't. Your outlines aren't that bad, though some need to get fixed, but you haven't paid any attention as to perspective, composition nor the difference in proportion between male and female. + There's no screentone 
The story is funny, but I feel like you're rushing through it, which really isn't necessary, with all the actions in it, it won't get boring if added one or two pages extra to just show some more regular events that happen before the main activity starts. (It's a bit hard to explain, but I try to tell you to put in some 'break pages' in between two different activities. Like when Koari got chosen for the Cosplay event, explain what she has to do and what she thinks of it while laying in bed for example. Just cut a break, don't go directly to the catwalk.)
About the proportion, I noticed that some guys have really thin necks, which is totally not guyish at all, guys have thicker necks than girls, so take a notice.
You can also study the differences between male and female characters on websites or in books.
Well, I'll have to go now, it's dinner time here
Good luck with your manga and don't forget to visit mine:
http://animaltamer.smackjeeves.com/
The story is funny, but I feel like you're rushing through it, which really isn't necessary, with all the actions in it, it won't get boring if added one or two pages extra to just show some more regular events that happen before the main activity starts. (It's a bit hard to explain, but I try to tell you to put in some 'break pages' in between two different activities. Like when Koari got chosen for the Cosplay event, explain what she has to do and what she thinks of it while laying in bed for example. Just cut a break, don't go directly to the catwalk.)
About the proportion, I noticed that some guys have really thin necks, which is totally not guyish at all, guys have thicker necks than girls, so take a notice.
You can also study the differences between male and female characters on websites or in books.
Well, I'll have to go now, it's dinner time here
Good luck with your manga and don't forget to visit mine:
http://animaltamer.smackjeeves.com/
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by Nigz » December 4th, 2011, 11:56 am
The post above pretty much sums up what I mean by flat
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Re: WITH A SMILE MANGA
by withasmilemanga » April 27th, 2012, 5:41 am
http://aionsoulweapon.blogspot.com/ new blogsite of manga hope u like it >_<
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