Well, these don't pertain to backgrounds, but I noticed you really gotta scan at a higher resolution, because the pixels are very obvious. You can also see your pencil work way too well, and it can seriously distract the reader when in reality you want them to focus on inks. The new page is kind of confusing, I think it may be rushing through the scene because I can't tell whats going on.withasmilemanga wrote:i have improve my skills little... backgrounds shadings... if u want to see here is the link to compare.... old http://withasmile.smackjeeves.com/comics/1345483/chapter-2-page-16/ and here is the new http://aion.smackjeeves.com/comics/1479661/aion-chapte1-page-4/ did i improve??? what can u say???
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