I think you should have some of the colour reflect in the water, like it does on the other page. Without colour, the reflection didn't read at all until I looked closer, but I think it should be something that's obvious on the initial read.
You're right, and honestly, I knew that. I was *cough* avoiding it because I couldn't get it to look right. Maybe the angle? But anyhoo, I shouldn't avoid things because I'm not 100% good at them(after all, that's why I picked finished and color for this challenge). Attempt two hoooo!