I've decided to stop lurking in the SJ community and decided to finally make my own comic!
It started as a comic for a summer class, but I decided to take it a little beyond that.
I have the first two pages up, and hope to have another page up sometime this week.
I hope you guys like it. c:
http://godcomplexcomic.smackjeeves.com/ ... -1-page-1/
Linkage to the first page above!
Comments are loved, and constructive critique is appreciated.
Enjoy!
New Manga: God Complex//
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by CometTheMicroraptor » June 28th, 2009, 4:03 pm
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Re: New Manga: God Complex//
by snorgar » July 2nd, 2009, 9:05 am
Looks a bit interesting. You make mention in your comic that your first 2 pages are under par so I assume you could do better (going on you words about said pages). Since it is only 2 pages I would suggest redoing them. They will be the first thing new readers will see and you want to put your best work forward. I have seen longer running comics where once the artist had gained experance that the 1st chapter was redone in an effort to grab new readers so it is just a suggestion.
Other than that I can't say much you ony have 2 pages and one is a cover. Your atr is interesting and don't think I am saying it is bad you where the one that stated you can do better and their where issues with Photoshop and what not that caused your work to decline. I am just suggesting but your best work forward and not wait till that 100 page mark before you redue pages. Start off with your A game.
Other than that I can't say much you ony have 2 pages and one is a cover. Your atr is interesting and don't think I am saying it is bad you where the one that stated you can do better and their where issues with Photoshop and what not that caused your work to decline. I am just suggesting but your best work forward and not wait till that 100 page mark before you redue pages. Start off with your A game.
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