Are you a fan of FMA? Looking for writer!

[Raichi]

What I'm looking for:
Someone to help me elaborate on the writing of my FMA doujinshi, we write it together because I already have a lot of the story in my head. So this we do together.
My task will be making the comic, your task will be writing the script for the comic.

What the comic is about:
Two ishval boys set out on a journey to central city, which will change their lives forever.
It's very complicated to explain, but I have a character biography of the two boys isha and shayem if you want to read up on it. (it's kind of lengthy to post here)
Isha is an alchemist who doesn't like his life at the orphanage and his friend Shayem isn't happy with his family's loathing of alchemy, so they escape in the middle of the night and this is where the comic starts. Isha's roleplay example pretty much is the start of the comic

cover (still needs title)
page 1
page 2

PS. this comic is a continuation of FMA1 + The Conquerror of Shamballa (sorry brotherhood fans)

[Zephyr777]

Aww i love brotherhood but this will work just fine. Do you know the time setting and etc.? Cause i would like to try-out for it.

[Raichi]

Yes, time is a follow up on COS, so in order to know it's crucial you've seen the first series and movie
In case you've only seen brotherhood, you could watch the conqueror of shamballa but it might confuse you since the first anime took such a different turn from brotherhood.

[Zephyr777]

Ok give me a day, 3 at most to get a full understanding of it. I'm off to watch it ^^. That's if you pick me to be the writer. Well anyways, i'm still off to watch it. Just ask if you want to see my current work.

[Queerious Toast]

Just an FYI, ALL Ishbalans have white or silver hair.

[Troll]

^
Hair dye is possible (:
It would be good if it's in the story - he dyed his hair.

[Raichi]

To Queerious Toast: In FMA1 there were isvallens with brown hair, two boys around the age of 10 if I'm not mistaking.

Not to mention the side character girl with the brown hair and pink(or lightbrown, depends on fma1 or brotherhood) bangs, she was from ishval too.
So what I've understood from watching both the anime-series they have white, silver and brown hair.

To Zephyr777: Page 3 is already in the making, but tomorrow morning I'm off on a holiday to a nice island for a week So you can take your time watching the anime, have fun!

50% preview of page 3 wip

[Queerious Toast]

Woah... Rose wasn't Ishvalan in FMA 1, FMA 2, or the manga. What FMA did you watch?

Then again, this is your comic so...