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Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Zephyr777 » July 6th, 2012, 3:48 am

I am currently looking for a team that will be called Team ZephyrUS. We will make a website for our team and post concept art, scripts, forums, and most of all the manga that i have came up with that you can find below. PM me or message me below if you are interested. If you have any questions, just ask.

Manga Ideas:
The Big 3: *These Three Manga Inter-wind*
I.N.V.E.N.T.S:

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Genre:
[spoiler]Action, Fantasy, Adventure, Comedy, Mecha, Shounen


Background:
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The land of Vezora is going through an era called the "Break Era". The Break Era is causing technological warfare in within the land of Vezora causing it to crumble by constant war of terrorists. I.N.V.E.N.T.S is a organization of highly skilled Inventors with outstanding combat skills also... well most of them. Each of these skilled Inventors have a bot called Liphot. Liphots are the inventors greatest aid in combat...

Synopsis:
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Skyler, a 10 yr. old happy and nice kid unaware of the outside world. Skyler has been inside his house the whole entire life along with his only friend, R.O.N and his father. Until an accident happen that made his father show his true colors and that he had evil intentions that skyler were unaware of. After the accident, Skyler found out the truth that his dad killed his mom and that he has a plan to destroy the land of Vezora as they know it. Skyler is filled with rage and goes on a journey in search of his dad... Are skyler intentions in search of his dad the right ones?


Characters:
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Skyler & R.O.N
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Key Concepts:
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Liphots- Are little tiny robots like R.O.N that are able to fuse with their master to create a suit of armor to help the master. These robots are able to carry many things such as swords, food, and water. The Liphots and the master are connected in life, if the master is hurt then the robot is and vise-versa, so meaning if one dies the other one dies too.
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Chrono's Time:
Genre:
Spoiler! :
Action, Fantasy, School-Life, Shounen, Supernatural, Adventure, Comedy


Background:
Spoiler! :
The timeteller... A watch given to the elemental gods by Chrono himself (God of time). Such a watch purpose was to cleanse and destroy any unwanted sins by elemental gods. This prized possession was protected by the elemental gods at all times. There are seven elemental gods: Lighting, fire, sun, light, wind, earth and moon. One day, the Fire god used the time teller and warned the rest of the gods of whats to come in the future. This future was dark and dead, even the elemental gods were defeated and done for. In a panic, the elemental gods kidnapped 100 kids from the planet Earth and trained them to become strong like them. These group of humans are called Vahlians. The gods trained these humans to surpass them. They even taught them the "Pattern Art". One day, a small group of vahlians tried to steal the time teller from alter. Caught in their actions, they were challenged in duel to battle the elemental gods and if the vahilians won then they would get the timeteller but if they lose... they would get banish into eternal darkness. A few minutes later, these humans fell to the gods and were sent into eternal darkness. In this eternal darkness, they met a creature called Demazi, these creatures are able to grant massive powers to whom they make a deal to. In exchange for their soul, they got massive powers and got revenged on the elemental gods and the Great War started which resulted in all of the vahlians death and later on even the elemental gods, because of deal that was made. The deal that made the elemental gods no longer immortal... In exchange for getting their immortality, they promised that they wouldnt disturb the planet earth for another 2500 years... This was part of their plan for the future world of darkness...

Synopsis:
Spoiler! :
Lucian Knight is a 17 year old student that goes to S.K.Y Academy. One day when he forgets to get his grandpa a present for his birthday, he goes to the mall in search for an item for his grandpa. He finally finds what he needed to find and runs hastly home and decides to take a short cut home but instead of finding less time he finds his own death. He runs into several criminals that eventually shoot him but then he is saved by six shadowy characters. They give him a watch (time teller) to travel back in time before he was killed. Later on that night he learns the truth behind the time teller and that he is a vahlian?! But who tells him? and how does this person know? He soons finds out that they are other Vahlians in this time period that are in danger as well... So now the adventure of chrono's time will start!

Characters:
Spoiler! :
Main character: Lucian Knight
Age: 17
Personality: Intelligent and careful
Parents: Both are alive

Character: Riley Gale (best friend of Lucian Knight)
Age: 17
Personality: Playful, brave, and cocky.
Parents: Mom is alive, dad is missing
Back story: Girls! Girls! Girls! That all Riley always worried in these days but when he found out that his best friend Lucian began to act differently lately. He decided that he wanted to find out what he was getting involved with. What he finds out, will change his life forever. His dad also left him as soon as he was born.


Chapter #1 ( Hour #1): Unexpected Encounter

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INT. S.K.Y ACADEMY 4:20 P.M- DAYTIME


A small blue bird flies from the sky onto the window next to Lucian seat. Lucian quickly stirs away from the lecture to look at the bird.


LUCIAN
(smiles) I thought you were going to be late. Wow it's amazing how predictable this city is.


Lucian takes out journal and flips the pages until he gets to the page where he keeps his tallies for reoccurring events. Sees the section that is labeled "same bird at same time" and puts the 23rd tally under that section.


LUCIAN
Hmm let me see... Ah there it is! Eh that makes 23 today.


Sees the next section labeled "Same old lady walking across the street". Lucian then looks outside the window trying to look for the same lady crossing the street. He then sees her crossing the street and puts the 14th mark under the labeled section.


LUCIAN
Same old lady walking across the street? Check! Ok what's next?


He then goes onto the next labeled section which is called "Adult Man Falls off bike" but there was no sign of the man falling so he moves onto the next section, "Riley skips school to hang out with girls." He clearly sees with him not only one girl but three. He then puts the 64th tally under the section.


LUCIAN
(chuckles and gives a smiles) Whoa! Man he has more tallies than all of hem combined. 


TEACHER
(angry) Lucian! Stop daydreaming about your sick fantasies and answer my question!


Lucian attitude changes to serious mode and then stands up. The teacher calms down and then turns around from the board.


TEACHER
(calmly) Now, what's the answer to question? In a given period of time, 9.98e-1moles of Ne effuses. How many moles of CO2 would effuse in to the same period of time?


TEACHER
(voice-over, teacher gives an evil grin)He won't get this right.


LUCIAN
(sighs) 6.76e-1...


TEACHER
(voice-over, gets angry) What?! He got it right?!


KID 1
(whispers to Kid 2) Man, he didn't even need anything to answer that. He answered that question awfully fast.


KID 2
(whispers back) I know! He shouldn't even come to school... Why can't he just stay home and stop making us look bad?


Kids starts throwing their erasers, pencils, and paper balls at Lucian. Lucian pretends not to pay attention to them and just go on with his regular day by tallying events.


TEACHER
You may of got that answer right Lucian but you won't get the answer to thi...
The teacher gets cut off by the bell. Lucian gets up slowly from his deck and walks out casually. Then stops and turns around.


LUCIAN
Well maybe next you'll get me right?


TEACHER
(voice-over) Lucian!!! I swear, how does that kid know so much?! He hardly pays attention in class.


Lucian is content with showing up the teacher saunters out of the room. The video phone rings and he answers it. A hologram of his mom comes out from the phone.


LUCIAN
Hello?


MOM (ON PHONE)
Lucian! Did you get your grandpa a birthday gift like i asked you to?!


LUCIAN
(disappointment) Oh crap mom! I totally forgot it was his birthday today.


MOM (ON PHONE)
It's tomorrow... and don't forget you forget it! You better get him something and hurry, 'cause the mall closes in one hour and a half. If i see you giving nothing to your grandpa then you gonna be hearing it from me!


LUCIAN
(scared) Don't worry mom I'll get him something.


MOM (ON PHONE)
Now i gotta get going so i'll talk to you later. Bye.


LUCIAN:
(hangs up) Damn! I better get him something quick or my gonna kill me. Out of the many things how i could i let this slip by?! Don't panic you got this... I can still get him something.


INT. MALL OF ATMO 4:55 P.M.- DAYTIME


A small red bird flies towards the the mall. Lucian runs into the mall, and bends over to catch a breath. He puts his hands on his knees and rest real quick.


LUCIAN
Ok I'm here... (stands straight up) Hmm What will my grandpa want for his birthday?


Lucian puts his hand under his chin and starts thinking on what to get his grandpa. Lucian soon gets a light bulb over his head and starts to run.


LUCIAN 
I got it!!! I'll get hi...(gets interrupted)


Lucian bumps into an stranger in a black cloak and then falls down then rubs his head


LUCIAN
(apologetic)Ow! I'm so sorry!...


LUCIAN
(looks up at him) Mister?


Lucian's eyes quickly catches the attention of the box in the stranger's vicinity.


LUCIAN
(voice-over) Whoa! What a pretty an old looking box. My grandpa must want that right there.


LUCIAN
Hey sir, how much are you selling that box fo...


Gets interrupted and jumped on by someone. Lucian falls over from the weight of the other person.


RILEY
Lucian!!!


LUCIAN
(irritated) What the hell, Riley! I was talking to..


Lucian turns around and does not see the man anymore. Riley is confused by who Lucian was talking to.


LUCIAN
(confused) ...someone?


RILEY
(laughing) I don't see anyone, dude!


LUCIAN
I guess it was just my mind playing tricks on me. So, what are you doing here?


RILEY
Nothin', just the usual.


LUCIAN
(clueless) And that would be?


RILEY
Oh! I'm just hittin' up the chicks at the mall. You see those two hot ones over there?


Riley points to the two hot girls that are standing right near them. Lucian starts to get embarrassed.


LUCIAN
Yeah?


RILEY
(smiles) How about me and you hit them up?


LUCIAN
(embarrassed) Err Um... No, thank you. I got to get a present from my grandpa.


RILEY
(surprised) You still haven't got gramps a present? Geez! Man you're running out of time. I've already got mine for him.


LUCIAN
(surprised) You got him something?


RILEY
Yeah! Don't you member? You scary mom threatened us if we didn't.


LUCIAN
Oh yeah... So what did you get him?


RILEY
(pretends to zip his mouth) It's a secret! Well I'll catch you later, got to hit up these chicks. More chicks for me!


Riley then stops talking to Lucian and go towards the girls with a look of intent. He goes off-screen and then seconds later hear two successive slaps. Lucian gives a nervous, embarrassed face look.


LUCIAN
Oh riley... 


INT. MALL OF ATMO 5:45 P.M.- DAYTIME


Lucian has been walking around the mall for almost a hour but couldn't find his grandpa a present for his birthday. 


LUCIAN
(tired) Man! It's been an hour and I still haven't found him anything yet.


He  comes to pass a store called "Lovable Antiques" but he keeps walking by. Then he stops for a second then walks backwards looking at the shop title. He then gives a little chuckle at the shop title name.


LUCIAN
(chuckles) Wow, that a fruity store name! Well, it wouldn't hurt to check it out since I already have checked out most of the stores in the freaking galaxy. Hey! Since my grandpa is old maybe he will like an antique object!


Lucian goes into the store. As soon as he gets past the doorway, he sees the same man as before the one who he bumped into. He rushes to the man he ran into.


LUCIAN
Hey, aren't you that guy I bumped into earlier?


STOREKEEPER
(bows in apology) Yes, sorry if I ran off like that. I had to get to my shop... As you can see around you.


LUCIAN
(waves hand back and forth) No need to apologize. I ran into you so it's all good. So what do you have for sale?


STOREKEEPER
(shows him a watch) Well, I have this watch. Do you want it?


LUCIAN
Yeah! I'll take it, my grandpa would love it! I think... How much?


STOREKEEPER
50 bucks?


Lucian empties out his pockets but all he finds is 31 dollars, 9 pennies, and some lint. He gives this embarrassed look and then he gives the storekeeper the money.


LUCIAN
Dammit! That's out of my budget, Do you have anything for 31 bucks, 9 pennies, and some lint?


STOREKEEPER
Well I have this unique, antique chain.


LUCIAN
(sarcastically) You don't say...


LUCIAN
Yeah sure, I'll take it. 


Lucian walks out of the store swinging the necklace around his index finger. He stops for a moment then takes a closer look at the antique chain and admire its greatness.


LUCIAN
Wow. This necklace looks amazing and it was cheap too! No wonder why that store gets the name "Lovable Antiques" from. It's still a fruity name though.


Lucian walks out of the mall with the chain in his hands.


EXT. MALL OF ATMO 6:05 P.M.- DAYTIME


Lucian exits the mall and then looks at the sky. He notices that it's getting dark. He has to get home very fast before it gets dark cause danger lurks in the city at night.


LUCIAN
I wonder what time it is? Damn! It's getting dark. Don't want to be in the city when it's dark.


LUCIAN
(scared) I hear lots of crimes go down in the city at night. Rape! Murder! Theft!


LUCIAN
(shakes head) You're just wasting time here thinking about that stuff! Why do i always keep talking to myself?! 


Lucian starts running and decides to turn into an alley cause he thinks that it will lead him to his house faster.


EXT. ALLEY 6:30 P.M- NIGHT
It has already gotten dark, he carefully walks into the alley. Then out of nowhere 6 thugs appeared followed by their leader.


LUCIAN
(scared) !...


CRIMINAL 1
Nice necklace you have there kid. It would be a total shame if you lost that in the park or maybe in our hands.


CRIMINAL 2
Yeah! It would be a total shame if you did. Why don't we take it off your hands so you feel the loss of losing that chain somewhere.


LUCIAN
(voice-over, starts walking back) Shit! What do I do? Do i give it to them?


Lucian imagines him going home without his the necklace. His mom gets really mad and starts destroying the house. She then breathe fire out of her mouth and it covers Lucian and that's where it stops.


LUCIAN
(voice-over, shaking head) No! My mom would kill me if I went home empty-handed! Maybe I be all tough-like, someone heroic would save me like in the books and movies.


LUCIAN
(yells) No! Why don't you suck my balls!?


CRIMINAL 3
Why you little punk?!


CRIMINAL LEADER
(pushes criminal 3 to the side) Silence... I got this. 


CRIMINAL 3
(looks at the leader) But sir! He disrespected us! 


CRIMINAL LEADER
(shoots criminal 3 in the foot) I said silence! Like we have respect! We're criminals for peace sake.


LUCIAN
(voice-over, shocked) Did he just shoot one of his men?!


CRIMINAL LEADER
(looks at Lucian) That's pretty gutsy of you to say that to us. Do you know what and who you are dealing with?


The Criminal Leader then walks up to Lucian. Lucian shakes in fear and doesn't know what to do.


CRIMINAL LEADER
(whispers)I said, "Do you know what and who you are dealing with?


LUCIAN
(silent) ...


The Criminal Leader then pushes Lucian to the floor and points the gun at him.


CRIMINAL LEADER
(points the gun at him) Let me teach you a little life lesson. We "bad guys" hate heroes or fags like you that try to be brave. You guys bring us bad taste to our mouth because you are so disgusting and heroic that it makes his sick to our stomach. Next time, when your in a bind and you feel the urge to protect yourself and other people?


CRIMINAL LEADER
(shoots Lucian) Don't! Because this is the real life bitch! This isn't like your little fairy tales movies or comics with flying ponies and magical cupcakes. This is the real deal! Deal with it!


CRIMINAL LEADER
(talking towards the other criminals) Get 'em boys!


LUCIAN
(voice-over, dying) Is this really the end for me?


Lucian then falls to the ground. The necklace falls out of his hands and then the criminal leader grabs it. He puts it in his pocket. Then a watch comes out from the sky and lands next to Lucian.


???
Don't die in such a forsaken place! Use that watch to escape death and these cowards!
Then a shadow appears from on top of the building. He seems not like a regular shadow but a hologram shadow.


CRIMINAL LEADER
Who are you calling cowards bitch?! Do we look like a bunch of cowards to you?!


CRIMINAL LEADER
(to his men) Don't just stand there! Fire!


The criminal then fires at the shadow but none hit them. The bullets go through them. Then out of the shadow two pair of red eyes are looking at them. Then they notice them and start to get scared.


CRIMINAL 4
(scared) Uh sir what are those over there?


CRIMINAL LEADER
(surprised) What the hell? Don't just stand there?! Shoot them too!


CRIMINAL 1
(scared) Fuck no! I'm outta here!


CRIMINAL 3
(agree) Me too!


CRIMINAL 2
(shooting at them) What a bunch of sissy!


CRIMINAL LEADER
I'm outta of here too!


CRIMINAL 2
(mad but embarrassed)Really sir? And you're the leader.


The hologram shadow stops the Demazi from attacking Lucian.


???
(grunts) Get the watch now! Stop wasting time!


LUCIAN
But i can't move...


???
Stop being such a weakling!... You're strong than that!!!


LUCIAN
But i ca...


???
(interrupts) Be the god you're supposed to be!


???
(kicks the watch closer to him) Now go!


Lucian then grabs the watch and then clicks the top of it. He then sees an area of lights passing him fast. Lucian is amazed at the sight of going back in time.


LUCIAN
(amazed) What in the world?


Lucian then appears at the entrance of the mall.


EXT. MALL OF ATMO 6:15 P.M.- NIGHT


Lucian then feels himself for any wounds but no sign of them. Lucian pulls out his phone and it seems he went back in time 15 min before he got shot. He gets outs the watch and sees that the small hand went from 12 to 11.


LUCIAN
(confused) No wounds? Not dead? Back at the mall? What just happened? Did I go back in time. This is all so confusing!


LUCIAN
(noticed it's getting dark) I better get home!  


LUCIAN
(while walking) I wonder what this watch does? Maybe this what helped me travel back in time.


LUCIAN
(shakes head) No way that this piece of equipment could teleport me back in time! Well I guess ill look into it tomorrow. I got alot of homework to do tonight.


Lucian instead takes the long way to avoid getting killed and looks at the watch the whole time on his way home.


INT. LUCIAN'S HOUSE 6:45 P.M.- NIGHT


Lucian carefully walks into the house and tries to sneak up the stairs but his dad caught him in his act.


DAD
(greeting) Hey there Lucian!


LUCIAN
(voice-over) Wow! He didn't even turn around. He must have that mother sixth sense.


LUCIAN
(walks backwards down the stairs) Hey dad... Is mom home? She called earlier.


DAD
Nah, she had a business trip. That's why i'm cooking tonight.


LUCIAN
(voice-over) Oh no! He's cooking dinner tonight!


Flashbacks to when he was 10 years old and mom wasn't there to cook dinner and so his dad cooked. At first it looked good to Lucian but then after he ate it, he started vomiting all over the place for the rest of night.


DAD
(curious) What's up Lucian? You don't look very good. Are you ok?


LUCIAN
(nervous) Yeah I'm ok! Never been better!


LUCIAN
(voice-over) He may the sixth sense of a mom but not the seventh sense of a mom. The ability to cook food...


LUCIAN
Well anyways, I'm not hungry tonight dad. I'm gonna be in my room doing homework ok dad?


DAD
(eyes start to shine) You do that good son of mine!


He enters his room and closes the door really quick. He locks the door and pulls out the watch.


LUCIAN
(pulls out the watch) Could this thing possible transported me back in time? It's probably a fake!


He throws in on the bed and then he turns on the T.V. A shocking picture on T.V. scared him. It was a picture of Riley Gale, dead.


TV ANNOUNCER (FEMALE)
17 year old, Riley Gale has been found dead in the alley next to the mall of Atmo with a total of eight bullet wounds. From the paramedic, the main cause of his death is due to severe loss of blood from his heart that was punctured by a bullet. He presumed to be dead at 6:33 P.M.


LUCIAN
(shocked) What in the hell! Why did he die?! 


LUCIAN
(clutches his fist) Especially the same way I was suppose to die. Why didn't no one save him!


                                            ...Fades out
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Key Concepts:
Spoiler! :
Death's wish: In order to save some life, some one else life must be taken but it is taken at random in the last 24 hours and it is taken at random so you don't chose.
Law of Vahlian: states when passing on their power to an offspring, only the oldest kid will get the power when the parent of that power dies but when the kid dies and no one is next in line to get the powers of that god then the power will go to the person that defeated that person. When the oldest child dies then the power gets passed on to the next child.



Project Color:

Genre:
Spoiler! :
Action, Adventure, Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Shounen, and Comedy

Background:
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Humanity lost hope when Lucian and the other Vahlians fell to the main antagonist of Chrono's Time. Humanity was in despair but then they happen to found the last vahlian left on earth 50 years later. King Luke the ll happened to be the last of the Vahlian in the world. He was king of the land Scora, one of the nation names after Vezora seperated into 5 different nations. King Luke was then ordered to be assassinated because he refuse to give up his powers and to be in the experiment to extract his powers. He was then killed by his son, Prince Archer. Due to law of Vahlian, he obtained the power. He then became part of the experiment and then they extracted his blood and made a serum. The Serum was then given to 50 people before the main antagonist also known as the evil King killed King Archer and destroyed all the data that was obtained the experiment. The other nations got scared and then initiated Project Color. They did the scared and run away tactics. They put all of the important people in the project and created this artificial world. The Evil King didn't do anything cause no one would now step in his way. Everyone was left to suffer...


Synopsis:
Spoiler! :
Prince Leonex, a 16 yr old prince that was a part of Project Color. He was the prince of the land of Xrye. In Project Color, he was hated by everyone even his own family. He wasn't bothered by it because he knew the world he was in was a fake due to his mental ability, 5th-wall abillity. The abilitiy to detect when a world is fake. He has been trying to get his whole life , time goes faster when in project color. He had not succeeded after all these years. Until one day, he was released by his said so brother. Leonex doesn't believe its his brother because he has not yet has his memory. All that Leonex has is the feeling that this world is real. His brother explains to him that he is an Utopian. Utopian are mutated Vahlians but they have no elemental ability. But they have one physical and mental ability. Suddenly the facility was attacked by commoners to find out that they aristocrats were hiding so the two people fled. The facility was then destroyed and Leonex was brother was gone is an instant. Is Leonex prepared to take on this ugly looking world?

Characters:
Spoiler! :
Prince Leonex: Stubborn, careless, cold-hearted (at first), smart

Key Concepts:
Spoiler! :
Project Color- A facility where the aristocrats are when they fled. This facility contained machine where lets these live in a fake world and erased all of their memories. They lived their forever until someone releases them or they die.
Utopian- A mutated Vahlians, but no elemental power and has one mental and physical ability.



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*LEFT TO RIGHT* Lucian (Chrono's Time), R.O.N (Invents), Prince Leonex (Project Color), Alecia (Chrono's Time), Skyler (Invents)


The Other 2:

School X Assassin:

Genre:
Spoiler! :
School-Life, Horror, Action

Story:
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Lucifer a 16 yr old sweet and caring, always looking after his little sister from all kinds of dangers such as bullies. Then one day, he founds out his sister has cancer (haven't really thought of a disease but will soon). She will die at faster rate if she doesn't have treatment. Lucifer could not afford the treatment and leaves the hospital in despair, not knowing what to do.

As he walks down the street, he runs into this oddly mysterious guy and he drops a flier. At first, he picks it up but doesn't read it and throws it behind him and keeps walking then a little girl runs up to him and gives him the flier claiming that he dropped it. He then takes a closer look at it. He couldn't believe what he saw, 1 million dollars to complete project S.O.A (school of assassin, he didnt know what it meant) Without hesitation, he filled it out and mails it the address on the flier. Weeks later, he get a response saying that he will commence project S.O.A soon, and is to meet at the train station 103. The letter also included a ticket to board that train.

When he arrived, there were kids like him ready to board the train. An hour later into the ride, the train car he was in started to fill with gas that made him pass out. When he woke up, hes in a bed with a wristwatch and then he hears an announcement that says all student come to the gym. Where exactly is he? In a school?

So walks outside the door and follow the students, these students weren't no ordinary students but criminals and psychos. He carefully followed them to the gym, the principle announced: "Students welcome!... Welcome to project S.O.A... School of Assassins..." He talked bout the rules of the school and claimed that if they finished the program or graduate S.O.A, they will get a million of dollars but here's the catch... Only one person will graduate... Lucifer was stunned and didn't know what to do, what did he get himself into...

Characters:
Spoiler! :
Lucifer
Age: 16
Personality: Pacifist, nice, caring, and always in a positive mood.


Key Concepts:
Spoiler! :
1. Every student is assigned a target at the beginning of the program and must kill that target, then when that person kills that target they get that person's target until there is one person left.
2. After one week, if you haven't killed your target then you die due to effect of the watch.
3. Whenever you kill a person, the watch will randomly assigned what part of your target that you have to eat like the heart, brain and etc.
4. Whenever you eat the certain part of your target then you get Kill points which let you buy weapons and intel to kill you're next target or even buy food.
5. There are safe zones in the school (which meaning that you can't be killed in that spot) but won't be said right now.
6. Stay alive!


Girls World! *New*:

Genre:
Spoiler! :
School-life, Comedy, Romantic, Adventure

Story:
Spoiler! :
Have you ever been asked the question "What will you do if you were the last guy on Earth?" Luke, a 15 yr old has never been asked that question because he can't stand girls. He is homeschooled from his father and his 2 older brothers go to regular school. One day his whole family got sick so he was required to go get some medicine to help them get better. When he does, he runs into this girl at the counter and he treats her like dirt and makes her cry. She happened a little goddess in disguised as a women working at a drug store. He goes home with the medicine and soon falls asleep. When he wakes up, he finds something very shocking. His dad and brothers have been turned into sisters and mother. Not only them but all of the guys inthe world have been turned into girls. Luke is trapped in a world of girls!!! He then turns to his only friend who he found in a guy site named "ImnOTAwomEn04" they are best friend. Luke finds out he is unaffected but it turns out... that guy is a pretty girl...

Characters:
Spoiler! :
Luke: Antisocial, nice... well mostly, and funny
Likes- Just about everything
Dislikes- GIRLS!!

Karen: A young nice pretty girl that happens to luke best friend on the computer.

Key Concept:
Spoiler! :
THE WORLD HAS BEEN TO NOTHING BUT GIRLS!!!
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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Zephyr777 » July 6th, 2012, 4:32 am

I uploaded the first chapter for invents. The first chapter of Chrono's Time is already uploaded. Now i need to upload is Project Color, School X Assassin, and Girls World! Project Color and School X Assassin, i already have their script all i need is to convert them into the right format. Then i need to create the Girls World! script from scratch. Once i uploaded all of them, I will start uploading a chapter per week for each manga idea. I know! What a challenge!

The Ch.1 of invents takes place 5 years after the one-shot. Skyler isn't the same character anymore due to the accident that happen 5 years ago. If anyone can, could you check if i use different characterization? That is something i am really working hard on.

Invents Ch.1 The Return!
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INT. TRAIN - DAYTIME


A red and black metal cargo train comes from the horizon. The train is going as fast as the speed of lighting. The train is fastly approaching the city of Hayden. Skyler is asleep in one of the train's cargo car. The conductor has fallen asleep on the job and is woken up when he falls on the floor. He realizes that hes is near the city of Hayden.


CONDUCTOR
(looking out of the window) What's that in the distance?


CONDUCTOR
(freaks out) Holy crap! It's Hayden! It's so close! We're gonna crash!


The Conductor then pulls the emergency breaks and then skyler and ron is thrown against the metal walls hard.


SKYLER
(wakes up) What in the world!


SKYLER
(rubbing his head) What is the heck is your problem you retarded train!?


RON
Master Skyler... It wasn't the train. It was probably the conductor who was controlling the train.


SKYLER
(Ignores Ron and kicks the train) Yeah! Take that and this!


RON
(looking at Skyler with nervous look) Why don't you ever listen to me, Master Skyler?


Changes back to the conductor view.


CONDUCTOR
(nervous) Good thing no one was on this train! That would cause some major whiplash whoever was on the train.


Skyler is still kicking the train then his foot finally starts to hurt.


SKYLER
(hoping on one leg) Ow! Ow! Ow! What is that thing made of?!


RON
(-.- face) That would be called metal, Master Skyler. You know like me.


SKYLER
(Dumbfounded) Your made out of metal?


RON
(sigh)


EXT. CITY OF HAYDEN- DAYTIME


Skyler and Ron got out the train and then they found themselves in the city of Hayden. 


SKYLER
(Talking to Ron) Next time we're taking something less dangerous.


RON
But Master Skyler! You are the one that suggested that we take the train to Hayden.


SKYLER
(crosses his arm and looks away) I remember no such thing!


Skyler then takes a deep breathe and closes his eyes for a second like he tried to imagine or remember something. Then slowly open his eyes.


SKYLER
(softly) It's been awhile since we've been here, hasn't it ron?


RON
Yes Master Skyler it has. It's been 5 years exactly. This is wher...


SKYLER
(cuts off ron and looks down) Please don't bring it up... 


SKYLER
(clutches his fist) Why did he do it?! There's no reason why he should of done it!


RON
Master but it wasn't your fault.


SKYLER
(clutches fist harder) Yes it was! Only if I had the strength to save them and stop him maybe none of this would of happen.


RON
Master if she was here, she wouldn't want you to be like this.


SKYLER
(picks up head) You're right! I'll bring them to...


Skyler then pauses for a moment then his stomach rumbles. Then he smells an aroma that is the smell of food. Skyler raises his head really quick then goes running full speed from where the source is coming from.


SKYLER
(running) Food!


RON
Did master just say that he will bring them to food? 


RON
(sigh) Sometimes I could never understand Master Skyler.


INT. RESTAURANT- DAYTIME


Skyler is already grubbing on some food. With a turkey leg in his right hand and corn on a cob in his left.


RON
Master, if I may ask but why are we  here?


SKYLER
(with a full mouth) Because I'm here to find someone.


SKYLER
(swallows food) Someone told me that this person will get me closer to finding the whereabouts of my dad.


RON
(excited) Who told you master?!


SKYLER
(thinks) Um who was it? Oh yeah! a fortune teller.


RON
(freaks out) You're gonna trust a fortune teller, Master?!


SKYLER
(mouth full) Don't worry about it! I paid the fortune teller 50 gold pieces. So he has to be a professional, right?


RON
(still freaking out) That still doesn't help me feel better, Master! And would please stop talking with your mouth full. That's so inhumane.


The waitress then comes with Skyler refill that he asked earlier because he drank his drink fast and needed a refill. 


WAITRESS
(puts the glass cup on the table) Here's your refill sir.


SKYLER
(turns to the side) Oh thank you!


Skyler then sees the glass cup. His hands trembles.


RON
(voice-over) Oh no... Not now.


SKYLER
(looks at cup) Um... Er... May i have metal cup... p-p-please?


WAITRESS
(smile) I'm sorry but we don't have metal cups. 


SKYLER
(puts head down) I hate...


SKYLER
(grips the glass)...Glass!


Skyler throw the glass on the floor because he didn't want to see it.


RON
(sympathetic) Calm down, Master Skyler.


Skyler is content with throwing the glass cup on the floor. The waitress is smiling then her face turns kinda of angry. She then rages at Skyler.


WAITRESS
(angry) That's it! I'm tired you stupid customers always demanding this and that! Well I've had enough! Who do you think cleans up this poo!


Skyler busts out laughing and he starts tearing up a bit.


WAITRESS
(hands on hip) What's so funny?!


SKYLER
(points at her) You said poo!


The waitress gets frustrated and hits Skyler on the side of the head. Skyler has a big bump on his head. Ron then notices the watch on her hand. It was so high-tech and looked like somebody invented it. 


RON
(looking at the watch) Hey master, look at her watch.


SKYLER
(rubbing head) What?


SKYLER
(surprised) Where did you get that watch from?!


WAITRESS
 What's it to ya?


SKYLER
You have to tell me please!


WAITRESS
(crosses her arm and looks away) Why?


SKYLER
(rubs back of head) Well you see, I invented that. hehe


WAITRESS
You invented this? Ha! You're only a child! 


WAITRESS
(puts hand under chin) Besides don't you have to be in "invents" to be able to invent stuff.


RON
(voice-over) Did this female call society stupid?


SKYLER
(stands up) No! I don't need invents to be able to invent stuff myself!!!


WAITRESS
Hmph!


SKYLER
(Dumbfounded) What's invents?


RON
It's an organization that have highly skilled inventors that keep the land of Vezora safe.


SKYLER
You're barely telling me this right now?!


RON
I didn't think it was important to mention. Besides I thought you already knew.


SKYLER
Well that's not important right now... What is important right now is...


SKYLER
(grabs the waitress hand) is that watch! Now tell me where you got it from!


Waitress then slaps him really hard for grabbing her. Then everyone looks at skyler and ron. They soon start to realize something.


SKYLER
(rubs cheeks) What's up with you hitting me, lady?!


WAITRESS
Maybe you shouldn't harass me. Have you ever thought of that! Have some class, would ya!


RON
Um Master Skyler?


SKYLER
What do you want now!...


Skyler and ron then notices that they are looking at them and the wall back and forth.


SKYLER
(confused) Why do they keep looking at us and wall?


RON
I'll go check, Master Skyler.


Ron then goes to check what they are looking at. Ron eyes grows big and then he comes rushing back.


RON
Master! They have a wanted sign of you here too!


SKYLER
Aw! Cmon I can't go anywhere with that stupid wanted sign everywhere!


RON
Master, Why wouldn't they have the sign up on where you committed the crime?


SKYLER
Shut up ron! Let's just get out of here!


The policemen then rushes in with the wanted paper in his hands. He then looks at skyler on the wanted paper. It show Skyler poking his nose.


POLICEMEN
(looks at paper and skyler) I got a call from here! Is it really him?


SKYLER
(skyler has the same pose as the paper) Beats me...


RON
Master! Why are you poking your nose?!


SKYLER
(gets serious) Well that's my que!


He gets up and rushes out of his seat but then he runs into the waitress. He gets up and keeps running towards the exit.


RON
(Still running)So did you do it, Master?


Flash back to when skyler crashes into the waitress. It then shows a close up of skyler putting a tracking device on the waitress when he crashed into her.


SKYLER
(smiles) Yup!


EXT. AN ALLEY IN THE CITY OF HAYDEN- DAYTIME


They eventually run into the alley to lose the police from chasing them. They hide in the alley. They are out of breath.


SKYLER
(holding knees) Did we... lose them?


RON
I think so Master Skyler.


SKYLER
(gets mad) Did you really had to call the police?!


RON
Well of course, Master. We had to make it believable.


SKYLER
(sighs) Well doesn't matter we got the job done anyways. One way or another, we're gonna find out where she got that watch from!


RON
(starts beeping) Shes on the move master!


SKYLER
(gets excited) What are we waiting for?! 


SKYLER
(voice-over) I'm this close to finding where my father is.


EXT. TRAIN YARD- NIGHT


Skyler and ron is the train yard because they are tracking down that waitress. It is pitch black and they can barely see anything.


SKYLER
Dammit it's so dark! Where is she ron?


RON
Well from my locator, she should be  in that train car.


Ron then goes to the train car and lights in the yard then suddenly turn on. Then hear clapping coming from the top of the yard light.


WAITRESS
(clapping) So you put a tracker on me when we bumped? Smart kid. Too bad i'm not stupid!


SKYLER
Wait a sec?! If you're there! Then what's inside here?


RON
Wait Master Skyler! Don't!


Skyler then walks towards the train car and then he opens it and opening the door triggered a bomb and exploded.


RON
Master!


WAITRESS
(laughs cynically) Ah ha! That stupid kid fell for it! Maybe he's not that smart after all. I knew a kid couldn't outsmart me!


Then out of nowhere a boomerang comes out of nowhere and tries to hit the waitress but she dodges it. Skyler then comes out of the smoke unharmed. His eyes are red and he looks really evil.


SKYLER
(points and yell) Don't call me a kid!!!


RON
(sighs in relief) Master, your ok!


Ron then looks at skyler and hes kicking the train again because he thought the train was trying to kill him again.


SKYLER
(kicking the train) Take this and that!


RON
(freaking out) Why are you kicking the train?! The waitress tried to kill you not the train!


SKYLER
(stops) Now that I'm done with the train...


SKYLER
(points) ...now it time for me to beat the snot out of you to tell me where did you get that watch! Even if I have to hit a girl


RON
This is why Master Skyler never been good with girls...


SKYLER
(looks at ron) Shut up!


WAITRESS
(guys voice) That's the thing... you won't be hitting a girl!


SKYLER AND RON
(freaks out) It's a guy?!


SKYLER
(rubs back of his head) Yeah I kinda forgot that he can transform into anyone with that watch...


RON
(freaks out) How could you forget something that important Master Skyler!?


The waitress then clicks the watch and then turns into a bounty hunter. Then 6 of his men surround him.


SKYLER
(gets irritated) Bounty hunters!...


LEADER BH
My plan worked! I've outsmarted an inventor! I'm gonna kick your ass and turn you in for good 'ol money!


SKYLER
(says softly and looks down) You did all of this to catch and turn in me for money...?


LEADER BH
Aw little kid doesn't know what to do! Hahaha! Pathetic kid


SKYLER
(clutches fist) I'm not gonna ask again... Where did you get that watch from...


LEADER BH
(laughs) I don't know where I got this freaking watch from! Besides if I did remember, do you think i would even tell you?!


SKYLER
(looks up in anger) You're wasting my time with your childish games! Now tell me!


LEADER BH
Take 'em out!


The Bounty hunters then move in on them and tries to hurt him. But before they can get to him. The boomerang hits all of them in swoop and knocks them out.


SKYLER
Now ron!


RON
Yes Master Skyler.


LEADER BH
(surprised) What?! All my men were taking out by a boomerang?!


LEADER BH
(looks around) Where did they go?!


Skyler then appears behind the leader BH. Ron has transformed into a metal arm and latches on skyler right arm.


SKYLER
I hate people like you... People like you always tries to catch me and turn me in for a crime I did not even commit... All you want is the money they give you... You guys always waste my time... You guys never consider someone else feelings...


SKYLER
(angry) ...It sickens me!!!


Skyler then punches the bounty hunter then he flies and hits the train hard and gets knocked out. Then 10 mins later, ron has transformed into his original form and then they both tie all of the bounty hunters in ropes.


SKYLER
Well it looks like we were never found out where that bounty hunter got that watch from.


Then they heard banging and yelling coming from a train car.


SKYLER
(starts kicking that train car) You want some more huh?! Take this and that.


RON
Would you stop that master skyler!


They bust the lock on the train car and then the waitress that was impersonated came out from the train car. She goes and hugs Skyler really tight.


WAITRESS
My hero! Oh how long i awaited for this day to come! We're gonna get married and kids some day. 


WAITRESS
(pinches skyler cheeks) He's so cute! I think im in love!


SKYLER
(whispers to ron) I like the other waitress better even though she was a guy.


RON
(whispers back) You said it master. She seems crazy. She wants to have offspring with you Master.


WAITRESS
(freaks out) I can hear you! What does that suppose to mean!


Skyler goes and takes off the watch from the Leader Bounty Hunter and shows it the waitress.


SKYLER
(shows it to her) Is this watch yours?


WAITRESS
(cross arms and look to the side) Yes! But it got stolen from me yesterday.


SKYLER
(shows her the BH) By this guy?


WAITRESS
Yeah that's the guy! He talked about needing to catch some guy. Why?


RON
Master, some knows your here.


SKYLER
(looks down) I know...


SKYLER
(looking at the waitress) Do you know where you got that watch from?


WAITRESS
(puts her hand under her chin) Well I dont know the exact place where it came from. All I know is that it came from this address and was sent to me.


The waitress then gives him the paper of the address. Skyler then looks at it and gets excited.


SKYLER
Finally a lead!


WAITRESS
(blinks rapidly) You should rest at my house hero for saving me.


SKYLER
(whispers to ron) Yup she's crazy!


WAITRESS
I can still hear you!


SKYLER
(looks at her) No thanks! I'm good. I can't sleep when i'm fired up like this! 


SKYLER
(looks back at ron) Cmon lets go! We're getting closer to finding my dad!


INT.- WAITRESS HOUSE- NIGHT


The waitress then goes to her house then goes on the phone to make a call.


WAITRESS
(on the phone) They're on their way.


MYSTERIOUS MAN
(on phone) Good work...


WAITRESS
You should be expecting a robot and a kid with green hair.


MYSTERIOUS MAN
Ahh skyler! It has been a long time since i've seen him. This reunion will be quite the fun.


EXT.- THE HOUSE WHERE THE WATCH CAME FROM- NIGHT


Skyler and ron then walks up to the house. Skyler then stops and pause. Skyler is silent and still with fear.


RON
What is it, Master?


SKYLER
(softly) This is the house i used to live in with my dad...


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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby pbdq » July 6th, 2012, 10:51 pm

Don't you think you're over-planning a little? Don't get me wrong, I GET the desire to put a lot of work out there. Ever since I was a kid, I've had plans for novels, screenplays, plays, video games, comics, etc. At any given time, I'd have at least half a dozen projects I wanted to work on, but I was all plan, no product. And focusing on so many things meant that none of them were getting the time and effort they deserved.

Take my advice; when you're starting out, instead of working on a bunch of half-baked ideas all at once, pick ONE project to dedicate your time to, and put all the others on the back burner. Don't even pick your favorite one. Save that one for when you've had a bit more experience so you can make it the best you can be. After a while, you might be able to juggle multiple projects, but trust me, right now, it's best to work on ONE full-time. That's not to say ignore the others, just don't try to make them all happen at once.

If your Smack Jeeves profile has the correct age, then trust me, you have PLENTY of time to work on a ton of projects. But right now, you're setting yourself up for disappointment.
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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Troll » July 7th, 2012, 12:01 am

^
Well said.
But you can say all those projects listed above are practice stories till he's experienced enough to do his main/favorite thing.
So, doing all of those above at his current age (if his SJ profile is true) is still OK.
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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby pbdq » July 7th, 2012, 12:33 am

Troll wrote:^
Well said.
But you can say all those projects listed above are practice stories till he's experienced enough to do his main/favorite thing.
So, doing all of those above at his current age (if his SJ profile is true) is still OK.

Oh, of course he could do all of them. I'm just saying, it would be best if he worked on them one at a time, especially when none of them seem to be too far off the ground yet.
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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Zephyr777 » July 7th, 2012, 8:58 am

pbdq wrote:
Troll wrote:^
Well said.
But you can say all those projects listed above are practice stories till he's experienced enough to do his main/favorite thing.
So, doing all of those above at his current age (if his SJ profile is true) is still OK.

Oh, of course he could do all of them. I'm just saying, it would be best if he worked on them one at a time, especially when none of them seem to be too far off the ground yet.


I appreciate you looking out for me ^^ But I have thought this really... don't think i haven't. I personally i have 4 manga ideas in storage because those were ones i really enjoyed. I am doing this for many reasons. One of them is to acquire the necessary skills of making a manga, such as teamwork (since i'm a writer and can't draw), determination (meaning the will to finish a story), efficiency (meaning how fast and effectively i write a chapter in such amount of time), and discipline (meaning that i have a set time to write this many chapters which is why i am writing 5 chapters for each week for each manga). I know i won't make any money from this. All i want is to get these skills and get my story out there. Get it heard! Know that i am here! Know that I exist! Don't give a damn about such money! Anyone who has the same ideals could join if they want or not but all i say that there will be no pay. Just the satisfaction of getting skills and the experience. I don't know maybe we will make money but im not making any promises.

I know i have alot of time but i don't want to start later, I want to start now. I'm not being defensive, Im just speaking my feelings :) I really do appreciate your concern thought, honestly.

On the other note!!! Finish the coloring for the pic lol

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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Zephyr777 » July 23rd, 2012, 6:46 am

Completed the Invents one-shot : D http://www.mytakoyaki.com/Invents/
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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Zephyr777 » August 20th, 2012, 5:03 am

Still looking
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Re: Team ZephyrUS (manga ideas + script included)

Postby Zephyr777 » December 23rd, 2012, 3:21 pm

still looking
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