Ebi's Manga Art And such ;)

[Ebi14]

I made this thing to see what people will think about my sketches..

Since im not that good yet, it won't be that good..

This is the first drawing that im adding.

[ZComics]

I think he stands very weird.

[Ebi14]

Yeah he is isnt he

But this is a sketch that i did a while back..
I will be posting better sketches later

[Black-Rabbit]

I like it! just by looking at your style I can tell you have potential! keep up the good work! ^_^

[Ebi14]

Hey Thanks Alot!!

[Ebi14]

This is a sketch i drew recently..


Does this look like manga material to anyone??
Because i wanna know if i could put this into a manga im going to create..

[Ebi14]

[Amante]

:?

Eh, if you're going to double post, at least make it of a drawing or a reply.

[Ebi14]

This is a picture i kind of just doodled


And heres one that i made recently, But something doesn't look right..


And here is a close-up Drawing.


Well thats all there is for the moment.

[Ebi14]

Here is a sketch i did last night, and i honestly think that its the best so far.

[Ebi14]

Here is another 2 sketches i made..

[Ebi14]

Heres a sketch i did just now.
This character will be in a manga i will be making soon..



(Please critique..)

[Brody Aran]

when you draw hair, you should consider that there's a skull cuz right now it seems like your characters have flat heads.
Edit: if u want to do a manga, train some full bodys with geometrical forms to improve your poses

[Ebi14]

Hmm i havn't noticed that before, thanks for pointing it out

[set]

you've got talent! one thing I'd suggest working on is the shading of your hair. The zig-zag white highlights don't tend to look like they come from a realistic light source. draw a circle or a sun in and shade from that angle:

Spoiler! :

of course, the light source is all up to you, but try varying the shading and highlights a bit. especially since you're drawing traditionally, it'll give your art a much more wholesome appearance and fight that "flat face" problem brody mentioned.

looking forward to seeing more from you!